Post by gemma on Apr 24, 2009 23:35:18 GMT -5
TITLE: Mayday
TYPE: Free Verse
CRITIQUE: Absolutely
OTHER: Mayday is a double entendre, as far as this poem goes. It's the title of the song that I refer to, and also my anniversary <3
smile for me
i want to see your eyes
glow
drive with me
and i feel freedom
once more
that flobots song
b o u n c e s
in the background
harsh string and vocal melodies
cut through
the sounds of a
r e l e a s e
to me
and when i think of
safe
i’m always in your arms
and when i want to
escape
we’re driving in your car
late nights
and no one knows where i am
dark skies
my feet up on your dash
that time is gone
and some days i just have your
smile
that’s enough
TYPE: Free Verse
CRITIQUE: Absolutely
OTHER: Mayday is a double entendre, as far as this poem goes. It's the title of the song that I refer to, and also my anniversary <3
smile for me
i want to see your eyes
glow
drive with me
and i feel freedom
once more
that flobots song
b o u n c e s
in the background
harsh string and vocal melodies
cut through
the sounds of a
r e l e a s e
to me
and when i think of
safe
i’m always in your arms
and when i want to
escape
we’re driving in your car
late nights
and no one knows where i am
dark skies
my feet up on your dash
that time is gone
and some days i just have your
smile
that’s enough