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Post by christine , on Apr 23, 2009 15:11:25 GMT -5
TITLE: Can't They See?
TYPE: Free Verse.
CRITIQUE: Yes.
OTHER: Wrote this today. I've been sorta "distant" lately.
hopelessness
buries itself deeper
i feel so numb
without you here
my face darkens
no smiles to be seen
almost like a dream
i can't be without you
surrounded by others
i feel so alone
what can i do
to make them like me
i'm nice and extra polite
always supportive
but never too clingy
i've got no one else
they don't listen
why can't they see
i'm doing the best
that i can
s l i p p i n g
slowly
i don't know
what to do
there's got to be a way
to make them believe
i'm not so strange
as they see
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Post by Kaiya on Apr 23, 2009 15:44:14 GMT -5
My heart just broke a little. This is... I don't even know what to say.
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Post by christine , on Apr 23, 2009 16:02:52 GMT -5
Is that a good thing? I mean, it's exaggerated, but I still feel like people don't like me all that much...
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Post by Kaiya on Apr 23, 2009 16:47:10 GMT -5
Yes, a good thing.
I don't know about other people, but I like you. (: I don't know why people wouldn't.
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Post by christine , on Apr 23, 2009 16:52:18 GMT -5
Thanks, hon. I like you, too. ;D
I dunno, it just seems like I'm a third wheel that everybody else hates or at the least, finds extremely annoying...
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Post by Kaiya on Apr 23, 2009 17:19:38 GMT -5
YAY ME! 
I know what you mean... Don't worry, I'm sure it's all in your head. ;] <333
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Post by christine , on Apr 23, 2009 17:21:30 GMT -5
Haha. Yayness!
I guess so.
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Post by Kaiya on Apr 23, 2009 17:39:09 GMT -5
Hon, don't worry. Really. If you feel with the third wheel, introduce a new friend to the group and make it a foursome. Or a whole messload of people!
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Post by christine , on Apr 23, 2009 17:49:26 GMT -5
There's no new people around here, though! And people outside of the "group" don't really accept me well either...
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Post by Kaiya on Apr 23, 2009 17:53:47 GMT -5
Hm. What about meeting people outside of your school?
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Post by christine , on Apr 23, 2009 18:19:37 GMT -5
Well, aside from my rp sites, I dunno. I really don't get out of the house much. :/
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Post by Kaiya on Apr 23, 2009 18:32:20 GMT -5
*sighs* Neither do I. You should come to Michigan, that way we can get out.
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Post by christine , on Apr 23, 2009 20:34:13 GMT -5
Sounds like a plan!
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Post by t w i z z - - on May 12, 2009 18:42:09 GMT -5
I know it's a bit late, but I just saw this... wow. I think everyone feels like this sometimes, but you did an amazing job of putting it into words. this is really spectacular.
but I'm sure people like you, and this is all in your head (everyone feels like this, including me, I think.)
and we all like you here, so don't worry. [/size] |
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Post by christine , on May 12, 2009 20:57:31 GMT -5
aww, thank you so much. i try really hard to pin down my feelings, but sometimes it's really hard. i really hope it's in my head. currently i'm not all that worried about it. actually, i'm worried about my brother, adam. he's having a rough time at school and riding the bus to and from. i just don't know what to tell him other than to ignore people. anyway, that's neither here nor there. anyway, love you guys. thank you. |
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