[K] Pearls

[Kaiya]

TITLE: Pearls
TYPE: Free Verse
CRITIQUE: Oui
OTHER: Title is subject to change.

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it's kind of funny
to see you again
sitting
with your head held high
pearls clinging
around your otherwise
plain
neck

to see him again
attached
to you without strings
tail wagging
still trying to please you
just
you

to see you again
oddly
in a different light
obnoxious light
really doesn't suit you
or
him

to see you again
clearly
who you are really
I can't stand it
and can't try to believe
your
lie

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[t w i z z - -]

wow - this is great! i love the... i don't know, theme of it.
my favorite is the tail wagging, it's great symbolism - and the "to see you again... in a different light." it's really great!

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[Kaiya]

_{*glows* thank youuu. (: i like it, and then again i don't. it's growing on me, though. tehe.}