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Post by Kaiya on May 6, 2009 16:58:58 GMT -5
TITLE: Untitled I TYPE: Free Verse CRITIQUE: Sure OTHER: Rated "T" because it's...suggestive? Maybe it should be rated "M"? Hm. Let me know what you guys think I should do.
I want to e x a m i n e you p i e c e by p i e c e R u n my h a n d s along you f a c e to t o e s Count your f r e c k l e s and your s c a r s F i n d the s p o t s that make you l a u g h t r e m b l e catch your b r e a t h I want to d o c u m e n t the c o l o r s of your h a i r . . . e y e s . . . s k i n Memorize the l i n e s of m u s c l e in your b a c k Make you m o a n in pleasure g r o a n in sweet agony s i g h in contentment I want to t o u c h you s w e e t l y t e n d e r l y h o t l y i m p a t i e n t l y Feel you b r e a k me b e a u t i f u l l y or q u i c k l y l o v i n g l y or h a t e f u l l y
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Post by gemma on May 9, 2009 0:24:40 GMT -5
lovelovelovelovelovelovelove
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Post by Kaiya on May 9, 2009 14:02:10 GMT -5
YAY! thank you<3.
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